Order placed
Thanks for your order, {{name}}. I'm an independent seller, so I place it with the company and I'm your first call for anything after. I'll message you when it ships.
A customer who has bought once is worth more than a stranger you have to find. What keeps them is not a clever pitch but a few well timed, honest messages: one when the order is placed, one when it arrives, one that asks what they really think, and one that helps when something goes wrong. These 15 messages work for any direct sales company, so they stay neutral about the brand. They cover the order and delivery, the honest feedback question, problems and returns, reorders, a review or a referral, and the birthday note. If you sell a specific company's shakes, see the Herbalife follow up page. Copy any message, or add all 15 to your keyboard and send them from any app.
Works in WhatsApp, iMessage, Instagram, Messenger and every other app.
Words in {{double braces}} are blanks. In the textcuts keyboard you fill them with one tap, and the names you used recently come back.
Thanks for your order, {{name}}. I'm an independent seller, so I place it with the company and I'm your first call for anything after. I'll message you when it ships.
Your order has shipped, {{name}}. Tracking from the company can take a day to show up. When it does, I'll send it to you.
Hi {{name}}, your parcel should have reached you by now. Did everything come, and does it look right?
No rush, but when you first open the {{product}}, tell me what you notice. The smell, the feel, anything. I like hearing a first reaction.
One tip for your new {{item}}: read the card in the box before the first use. The order of the steps matters and most people skip it. Ask me if anything is unclear.
Hi {{name}}, it has been a couple of weeks. How do you really like it? A straight answer helps me more than a polite one, and that includes "it wasn't for me".
I'm sorry about that, {{name}}. Could you send me a photo of what arrived? I'll sort it out with the company today and tell you exactly what happens next.
Thanks for telling me. Returns go through the company, so I'll look up the policy for the {{product}} and send you the exact steps tonight. You won't be left guessing.
Hi, if you have a minute, would you leave a short review of the {{product}} on the company's page? Say what you really think, good or bad. I'd rather have the truth than a favor.
Hi {{name}}, by my count your {{product}} should be running low around now. Shall I set up the same order again, or would you like to change something?
Hi, the {{item}} you asked about is back in stock. Want me to add it to your next order, or would you rather wait?
Hi, the company's holiday catalog is out. Here it is: {{link}}. The shipping cutoff dates are listed on the page, so you can plan around them.
Hi {{name}}, you mentioned a friend was looking for something like this. Would you like me to send them the catalog? Only if they'd want it, and no pressure on them either.
Happy birthday, {{name}}. There's no offer attached, I just wanted to say I'm glad you're one of my customers.
{{name}}, it's one year since your first order with me. Thank you for sticking around. Is there anything you'd like me to look into for the year ahead?
| When | Message | Note |
|---|---|---|
| Order day | Order placed | Always. |
| Day after delivery | Arrived | Catches problems early. |
| Two weeks in | The honest question | Ask once. |
| When it runs out | Time to reorder | Depends on the product. |
| Any time | Something went wrong | The moment a problem is reported. |
| Birthday | Birthday | No offer attached. |
| After a review request | Asking for a review | Once, and never with a reward for a good rating. |
Health claims about a product ("this fixed my sleep", "it helped my joints"). Health claims need solid scientific support, and one customer's story is not enough.
Instead: Tell them how you use it and what you like about it. For anything medical: "Please ask your doctor."
Before and after results presented as what a customer can expect.
Instead: Share how you use the product, and leave out numbers and promises.
"I'll give you a discount if you leave a five star review." A reward for a good rating produces reviews that are not honest.
Instead: Ask for an honest review and attach nothing to it.
Asking only your happiest customers for a review, or asking someone to delete a bad one.
Instead: Ask every customer who used the product, and thank the ones who are critical.
Letting a customer think you are the company ("our warehouse", "we will refund you").
Instead: Say you are an independent seller and that the company handles shipping and returns.
Promising a refund or an exchange before you have read the company's return policy.
Instead: I'll look up the policy and send you the exact steps.
Turning a complaint into a pitch ("you could sell it yourself and get it back").
Instead: Fix the problem first. Talk about anything else another day, and only if they ask.
Fake urgency about restocks or prices when it is not true.
Instead: Give the real date the company gives you.
Works in WhatsApp, iMessage, Instagram, Messenger and every other app.
On the order day, when it ships, the day after it arrives, and about two weeks later to ask how it is going. After that, message when something is useful to them: a reorder reminder, a restock, or a birthday.
Ask once, after they have said they are happy, and ask for the honest answer. The FTC's endorsement guidance says a discount or reward cannot depend on a positive review. Template 9 does it in one message.
Fix the problem first and read the company's return policy before you promise anything. Templates 7 and 8 take the customer through the first two messages. Then follow the company's own steps.
No. The Herbalife follow up page covers the first weeks of a shake customer and the business question. This page works for any company and covers the whole customer life, from order to anniversary.
Yes. 14 of the 15 use a single blank, which fills in on the free plan. The rest use two different blanks and need Pro to fill both from the keyboard.
Yes. textcuts is a keyboard, so the templates work in every app where you type.